Whelp, I certainly have been keeping a bit busy workshopping my previous poems, getting them whipped into shaped thanks to my writers’ club feedback and critique. So below this are links to three more short poems that have received the ol’spit’n polish. As usual, all and any feedback, comments and such are more than welcome. Cheers!
Came A Deer (previously Spoke The Deer)
Ivory Memory (previously Ivory God)
Once again I bring a few updates to some of my poems after workshopping them with some very talented people from my writers’ club (including two title changes). Links provided below. Hope you enjoy them!
PS. As usual, any and all comments/critiques/feedback is greatly appreciated and encouraged. 🙂
Fourteen Billion Hands (previously Our Current)
Skin (previously Match & Skin)
I made corrections and some cleanup to tighten three of my short poems that I took to my writers’s club. Enjoy!
A Sentence Speaks (previously A Sentence Breathes)